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Norwegian

Trad climber

Placerville, California

Topic Author's Original Post - Nov 8, 2009 - 10:42am PT

submersed as of current in a world with no wobble,

i've become aware of and unthankful for the sickening routine that follows me. or leads me, im not sure.

like, take monday morning for example:

i walk into the job trailer (contruction site) at 5 am, same as ever before.

my compadre steve will be pushin some color paper that reeks of vinegar.

i set down my digs, and he turn to me and utters with no soul:

"you have a good weekend?"

i always unthinkingly spew the cliche: "yea. worked on the house. wore my velcro suit around Wal-Mart and everything i passed by stuck to me."

so, tomorrow, when i cross that threshold from freedom to prosperity,

as steve begins his inquiry, i'll begin to smile with anticipation, because,
when he
you have a good weekend's me, im going to say

"yea. i lost my virginity"

i'll have a better day because of the twist.

rotten johnny

Social climber

mammoth lakes, ca

Nov 8, 2009 - 11:57am PT

is that velcro suit a chick magnet and do chickens have sharp talons...?

Norwegian

Trad climber

Placerville, California

Topic Author's Reply - Nov 8, 2009 - 01:39pm PT

the velcro suit? it only impresses chicks that thrive on excess.

my pale birthday suit draws the hippy chicks that normally gawk at tie-dye.

and.
chickens do indeed sport shharp talons. yes.

my confusion though is dull enough to absorb their painful complaints.